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World building and titles?

by
M.L. Chesley



Coming Soon!

What is it with book titles?


Well, in my book, Adversarius, the title is Latin for Adversary. Veritas is Truth and Bellum is War. I chose these names
specifically. I wanted one word titles for my books and each title represents
what is written within. Book one defines the adversary my characters face. Book
two reveals some hidden truths and book three is the war that ends an ages old
war.

It took me about ten years to build my
world of Eir du’Brusai. (Pronunciation Alert!: ‘air do brew sigh’) I had lots
of help. As a matter of fact, there is a list on my blog under the Special
Thanks page. I began with a small town called Moordigan, which grew into the
kingdom of Haldera and expanded (exploded, really) from there. At first, my map
contained one large continent with several kingdoms, surrounded by a few
smaller continents/kingdoms. After much debate, I split the major continent
down the middle, removed a couple of kingdoms that were on the main continent
and added continents.

So you can see why it took so long to build
just that aspect of the world. Next came the decision: Typical creatures of
fantasy or my own?
Well, I’m a huge Sword and Sorcery kind of gal. While I love
Elves, Dwarves and the like, I didn’t want to limit myself to that. So I
expanded on those typical races/creatures and also came up with some of my own.
I have Kefferlings, which are half Elf, half cat. They have Elven features,
walk on two legs (most of the time) but have fur covering their body and of
course, they have tails. Dargorians are my humanoid dragons. They stand about
nine feet tall, have scales, tails and wings like dragons with dragon-like
features. They stand on two legs and most can speak.


In the Elvish races, I’ve included water
Elves. These Elves live near bodies of water and can turn into fish-like
creatures either completely or partly, giving the impression of merfolk. I also
have ice Elves. This race of Elves must live in extreme cold climates. They
also reside around a special lake that had transformed them long ago. The lake
is the final resting place of an ice dragon and as the dragon deteriorates, its
magic has corrupted the water, giving ice qualities to whatever happens to
drink from the lake. So add in some usual creatures with these abilities as
well.

Lots of what I have included in my world
either already exists and I expanded upon it, or I used my imagination. Things
I needed to research were more along the lines of armor, weapons, hierarchies
and nautical terms. I have naval fleets and pirates. My pirates are spelled
‘pyrate’ however. Just to be different, no real reason other than that. My
wizards are called Mahjii and most of their magic has limits. Not necessarily
rules, just limits.

When creating something new, I have to sit
with my friends or husband and bounce ideas off of them. I feel that if myself
or any of my friends or husband find something unbelievable, chances are, the
reader will as well. Fantasy is about using your imagination, of course, but
you can go too far. Don’t be overly ridiculous in your creations, be plausible.
If you think something is over the top, most likely your reader will as well.
There are lots of sites out there that help in all aspects of fantasy writing
from name generators to the do’s and don’t’s of fantasy writing.

While you shouldn’t really let a long list
of ‘should not’s’ affect your writing, you do want to limit yourself. Expand
your mind and think outside of the box. Using typical characteristics of
fantasy such as races and creatures is all well and good, but take one and
start a ‘What if…?” scenario and see what comes of it. Take lots of notes and
keep these in a binder for future reference.

A good list of things to work on would
include:

·     Hierarchies. Do kings and
queens rule? Who is in line to inherit? Eldest son or daughter or is each
succession voted upon by the lower class? Could a peasant become king?

·   Money. What forms of money
would be acceptable? Gold, silver or gems? Perhaps your world uses a barter
system? Personally, I have several different types of monetary items. If any of
my characters end up in a different place, all forms of money are accepted, but
bartering doesn’t always fly with merchants.

·  Magic. Are you going to limit
the power? Does your magic have rules? Can spells only be cast once per day
like traditional table top gaming or endless spells? Will the magic user be
born this way or can anyone learn?

·    Gods and Goddesses. Do you have
one all powerful deity? Several? A pantheon? Do they walk among your people or
are they kept apart? Do they interfere? Do prayers work or do the gods ignore
them?

There is a lot to world building, more than
I can write about in a single post. As it is, this is probably reaching beyond
a limit. So I will leave you with these things to ponder and work out for
yourself. Everyone will go a different route. Some of us want to stick to tradition,
others want something new. And some of us are in the middle, like me. If you
have any questions, feel free to contact me. I love discussing fantasy! Links
are below of where to find me. Thanks again to Louise! Have a great day!
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Mel Chesley is a High Fantasy author, and has recently been signed with Hellfire Publishing with her first book in a trilogy, Adversarius, Shadow of the Rose, Book One (publishing date not specified)

She began writing at the age of 19, and lives in Alaska with her husband, children and cats.






What makes a good sci-fi novel?

by
Rocky Leonard

Please don’t ask me to name my “favorite”
science fiction writer. From Isaac Asimov to Rogers Zelazny, I could probably name
a favorite work by each—maybe, if you put a gun to my head.


Also, please don’t demand that I choose
between the authors of I, Robot and The Nine Princes of Amber, because I
can’t. They are only the first two legends of science fiction that popped into
my head as I tried to alphabetize a list of my sci-fi heroes. I didn’t even
take the time to compare and consider the works of Piers Anthony, Ray Bradbury,
Orson Scott Card, Arthur C. Clarke, Michael Crichton, Phillip K. Dick, Larry
Niven, or Jerry Pournelle, to name a few giants of the genre.

Modern cinema translates science fiction
novels from print to film better than just about any other literary work. Even
a well written short story by Phillip K. Dick can inspire a terrific feature-length
movie like The Adjustment Bureau. And
comic book characters such as the Hulk and Iron Man have become compelling,
believable characters in a live action science fiction adventure films which
rely heavily on computerized graphics to create somewhat realistic imagery for
the big screen.


Don’t believe me? Check out the list of the
top grossing films of all
time. Four of the top eleven should be considered science fiction movies.  Science fiction films are big business these
days.

And what writer does not aspire to see
their work translated to the big screen? Science fiction films are so visually
captivating that they don’t always require a great storyline to hold the
audience.

Avatar
was little more than an amalgamation of the plots
of Dances with Wolves, Coming to America, The Prince and the Pauper, Starship
Troopers
, and maybe just a dash of Peter
Pan
, packaged with an environmentally friendly message and set in a brave
new world. It was also the highest grossing film of all time, because James
Cameron created an amazing world in which to tell the same old story. 
Boy meets girl and they fall in love…so who
cares if he’s white, and she’s blue? 
Let’s face facts…when Kirk, Spock, McCoy,
and an unnamed crew member all beamed down to an alien planet, there was no
real mystery involved when it came to guessing which one of them was about to
be killed by an evil extraterrestrial creature of some sort. But that doesn’t necessarily
stop us from watching to see whether he or she would be devoured or
disintegrated.

What elevates a science fiction novel to greatness?

A fabulous science fiction novel like Larry
Niven and Jerry Pournelle’s epic tale The
Mote in God’s Eye
stretches the limits of one’s imagination to explore
foreign worlds populated by alien civilizations. But reaching for the stars
isn’t essential to produce a great science fiction novel—Michael Crichton
simply took the cutting edge of technology one dark step further in his classic
novel
Jurassic Park.

Scientists had learned how to extract
prehistoric DNA from mosquitoes embedded in amber. Crichton merely fantasized
about what might naturally occur as a result of man’s hubris and misuse of
advanced technology. Crichton took that scientific achievement and gave us dinosaurs
roaming around a remote island that had been converted into a biological
amusement park. The crucial element of his story was that he used existing
cutting-edge technology to provide a reasonable
explanation
for how the dinosaurs came
to exist on the island.

Therein lies the key to a great story—as
long as the author provides a plausible scenario allowing the reader to suspend
his or her disbelief, the story works. It is no longer just a good science
fiction novel, but a great novel in a science fiction setting.

My latest novel, Secondhand Sight, emulates Crichton’s style of writing science
fiction. Like the protagonist in Prey,
Crichton’s science fiction thriller about nanotechnology, the hero of Secondhand Sight, Dan Harper, is a computer
programmer by trade. Dan involuntarily takes a spiritual journey into the
surreal world of paranormal phenomena as he learns to trust his intuition. He is
an ordinary man thrust into extraordinary circumstances. Dan finds his normal
world turned upside down at a time of great personal duress by supernatural
phenomena he struggles to explain.

And most importantly, he learns to cope, and
ultimately rises to the challenge.  

Scientists have been doing research on
heart attack patients and other survivors of a near death experience, looking
for common denominators in their experience. Doctors have conducted experiments
to test whether the visions reported by many dying people are real or
hallucinations. Patients have described what they claim to have unique, new
experiences while their intellect, or “mind”, apparently separated from their
physical brains. These temporarily dead patients remained capable of creating
new memories while their physical bodies remained in either a dying or dead
state.

Ghosts are merely an extension of that
idea. However, instead of a near-death state, the person in question now
maintains an after-death state. As
one of my favorite literary heroes, Michael Crichton, grew famous for doing, my
research for Secondhand Sight
involved observing the cutting-edge of scientific research–in this case of
near death studies, and asking, “What if?”

Secondhand Sight 
Amazon.com
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Dan Harper is just an ordinary guy, having an ordinary day…until he ruins his tie during lunch. When he visits a thrift store near his office for an inexpensive replacement, merely touching a secondhand tie triggers a flood of gruesome images only he can see. Are they hallucinations, or suppressed memories?

Dan desperately wants these visions to be nothing more than a product of his imagination, but soon enough, he discovers real crime scenes and murder victims. Dan can no longer ignore the unseen powers forcing him to confront the demons of his past. Dark forces prod him to seek the identity of the faceless murderer haunting his dreams.

Dan’s worst fear is the suspicion he’ll eventually confront the face of this brutal killer in last place he wants to look – the mirror.

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Author Rocky Leonard



John “Rocky” Leonard was born in Savannah, Georgia and has spent most of his adult life in the northern suburbs of Atlanta. He holds a BBA in Management Information Systems from the University of Georgia and worked as a computer programmer for more than twenty years before becoming a writer.


John’s writing has also been influenced by shorter stints working as a
bartender, real estate investor and landlord. He has been married to wife Lisa
for twenty-three years and is the proud father of two and grandfather of three,
as well as pack leader for several wonderful dogs and a hostile Maine Coon cat.

John writes detective novels under the pen name Rocky Leonard.

The local color in his writing is equally authentic whether the setting is a
Georgia beach, downtown Atlanta, or the Appalachian foothills in north Georgia.